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©2008-2009 *Saphitri
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There is a wallpaper pack available here: [link]

This is sort of dedicated to one of my best friends, ~LupeSjiler. She just doesn't know it yet, though she's already seen the thing itself XD
I say 'sort of' dedicated, as in that you inspired me to make this; I started making this just after we had that long talk (you know... XD). I tried to make it purple-blueish at the least, but it just didn't turn out that way, sorry XD

(I make up for the lack of textures last deviation, but almost all of the textures I used were my own... XDD
And heh, who knew dictionaries help you coming up with titles? XD)


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Stocks: [link] [link]

Textures: [link] [link]

Critiques


:iconflying-house:
It looks amazing! I love all the variety of colors (and yet, they mix together so well), and I love the way you fused the subjects into the piece. And I like the ethereal feeling of it. It was played well with lots of subtle hints that end up producing powerful results.

And what strikes me as good observation is that you took into account the fact that this is an actual wallpaper and left space for icons... And you did a good job with it since the space isn't distracting in anyway and actually adds to the piece and what it's meaning could be. :D

Honestly, I really don't have any major critiques. My only suggestion would be to clarify the image in certain, very small parts of the piece (And I don't mean much at all-- Just small touches to maybe let us see a little deeper into the work/the story?), and also to extend that strip of coloring along the bottom up the edge of the left wall a bit-- Just to let it flow a little smoother and round it off to match with the orb-ish light coming from the center. I really only mean just on the very edge, and very little: I love that you didn't completely swallow the arm up in color. :D

Overall, wonderful job! 'Tis definitely something I would use as my desktop because I like designs with a soothing, yet unique and thought-provoking mood/look to them. :nod:

By the way, you earned my very first critique! I've never done one before and I felt I just had to here! It was that wonderfully thought-provoking! :hug:
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:iconmystichedwig:
Pretty colors <3 Me likes :3

And, forgive my igorance, but I see no difference between the WIP and this?

--
Imagination was given to man to compensate for what he is not, and a sense of humor to console him for what he is.
~Francis Bacon
:iconsaphitri:
Thank you =3
And that's because it's not a WIP, but a Wallpaper Pack XDD
(Tsk, don't you read the Artist's Comments? Shame on you~ XD)
:iconmystichedwig:
YES I DO *puts index fingers together*

But some people also write work in progress as WP xD. So there. *runs off with your cheesecake*

--
Imagination was given to man to compensate for what he is not, and a sense of humor to console him for what he is.
~Francis Bacon
:iconsaphitri:
Yeah yeah, sure sure.
No, I believe you, I get it now XD

*throws Leon out of 13th floor window*
:iconmystichedwig:
DWKUDYHSXJ<S X OMG HOW DARE YOU

Cloud: NOOOEEEEEES *dives*

You killed my dreams ;___;

--
Imagination was given to man to compensate for what he is not, and a sense of humor to console him for what he is.
~Francis Bacon
:iconsaphitri:
XDDDDDD
Don't cry, Cloud/Stel. Het was maar een opblaaspop. Leon leeft nog =3
Maar nu Cloud erachteraan is gegaan... XDDDDD~~

(Yotsuba&! is tyfusdroog trouwens, gestoord kind dat ze is XDDD)
:iconkari-ka:
Ik vind dit echt absoluut geweldig!
Kinda jealous on you :P
Mooi gedaan^^

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~ Kari ~
:iconanaisay:
Een kleine toevoeging (van 1 en dezelfde persoon die per ongeluk op d'r oude account zat om wat dingetjes te verwijderen :\ ): ik denk dat als het alleen paars-blauwachtig was geweest, het paars te overheersend zou zijn geweest. Het gele geeft een fijne lichte kleur aan het geheel.
:iconsaphitri:
Hehe, ik zag 't al ja ^^

Heel erg bedankt ^^ Thanks voor je positieve kritiek trouwens, ben ik 't zelf ook wel een beetje mee eens... In het begin was ik er wel een beetje door gefrustreerd, maar inmiddels heb ik er vrede mee en vind ik 't eigenlijk wel beter zo =D

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